*"Bidhawbar writuchawkrey amar awnayash jaatayaat"


Hey all,

So, this is for Soumi's Memorable March's last week's post, and am trying my luck with Bengali, I know am too weak with words, yet I tried, I was late though, Just saw the post, and didnt get enough time to think, yet, I wrote something : )





Ajo bhulite parini shei raat,
Shei ghono kalo nishuti raat,
Mor  moner gobhire ajo kapia othe,
Ek ojana bhoy.


Perechi ki sotti  bodlate,
mor ei kothin niyoti?
Perechi ki bachte?
Peyechi ki mukti?

Mor moner majhe ajo roye gache,
Ek ojana shotter choya,
Ja mone porile beche thakar iccha roy na aar,
Parini bhulite tomare ajo,
Paribona kokhono,
Prothom bhalobasha,
chuye geche mor mon,
Tumi thakibe mor prane, gobhire,
Chirodin, chirokal, jotodin ami beche roibo.

Tumi bolechile, jaibena chole,
Konodino amare eka fele,
Kintu shei tumi gale chole,
Shei nishuti raate, amare eka fele,
Ami tokhon juboti,
Ek kuri shobey,
Koria gele chiro molin,
Mor  ei jibon ta're,
Beche thakar icche roilo na amar,
Ar noy ar noy ar,
Bhablam debo ei pran,
Milibo tomar sathe abar.

Kintu holo kothay?
Abar je ek pothik ashilo amar jibone,
Chailo bhalobasha,
Shetai naki tar ek matro asha!
Parini tare ferate,
Jani ami kulota nari,
Kintu ami je bhalobashar kangalini,
Sheo bollo jabena chere,
Eka rekhe ai dhoronitole,
Ami bhablam pelam firey naki abar, tomare?

Ke jane eki sotto? Naki maya?
Ami ki achi beche? Naki ey chaya?

Bhalobasha pelam bote,
Kintu khub khinno,
Choley galo abar chere,
Koria dilo ondho,
Haraiya gelam sobar majhe,
Haraiya fellam nijeke,
Bhulia gelam ami ke?
Bhulia gelam nijeke.

Shei theke ami ei khane,
Kintu achi ekhon beche,
Roj je notun pat(part) kori,
Ei rongomonche,
Prochur manusher samne,
Tuley dhori ami amake,
Ek onno bhabe,
Protibaar,
Peyechi sonman,
Peyechi korotali,
Hoye gache amar jibon dhonno.
Kintu morey biswas koro, paini ar bhalobasha,
Ami chaina tarey ar,
Shey je boro nishthur amar jonno.


Noi ar shei Bidhawba,
ami je boro klanto,
ar parina korte shei writuchawkrey awnayash jaatayaat,
karon mon bole jinish tarey maria felechi,
bohu agey,
ekhon ami mukto,
bachte chai notun bhabe,
boyesh holo 2 kuri,
kintu tatey ki hobe?
Roj ami bachte parchi , ar na more..



P:S-  bangla te first post, hope thik thak hoyeche, thanks to Soumi for memorable march, loved it alot and khub khub khub miss korbo, march was an exciting month, just for this : )

Comments

  1. Okkkkk.......this was awesome......ur bengali imagery is pretty pretty good......loved it...:) and one thing......screw love.......it is just a pain in the ass sumtimes......

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    1. hey, thanks a lot : ) and yeah, screw love, i dont care about it much ; )

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  2. YAYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!! Who was inspired in its truest sense? Bejaye rabindrik jawdio kintu bhishawn bhalo. First attempt hishebey toh BHISHAWN! I'm mailing you my mobile number. Let me know when you're free after 10th April. We gotta meet some day! We SO gotta meet some day! Ami shawtti bawlchhi.;-)

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    1. hahaaa, really, i didnt think it would turn out that good, it was written in less than 10 minutes, didnt get enough time to think! thanks a lot for appreciating : )

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  3. Hey DA,Yes,yes, Bhisown Bhalo Hoyeche ! Ekdom Phata phati ! Your writing touched me deeply. Because of the feelings generated by your words and because of the language and style. Very touching. Very deep. Your Bengali is so flawless! You should attempt writing in this language more often.
    Take care and keep throwing more surprises !

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    1. wow, thanks a ton, bhison bhalo? really? am really pleased to know that. Will try to write more in bengali from now : )

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  4. i dnt think i have tje right to comment on such a masterpiece.... my mind is still spinning with the magic u hv created...the mist still numbing my senses....this one cud b sumthng special...rather it wud b sumthng special in future....reinded me of Benimadhab....truly an exhilirating experience i had reading this :-)

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